2017年12月英语六级写作真题解析：尊重

2017年12月六级写作真题解析：尊重

上海新东方学校 陆振辉 新东方在线

　　六级写作(第一套)

　　Directions：For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the saying “Respect others, and you will be respected.” You can cite examples to illustrate your views. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

　　本次六级写作考题中规中矩，考核以名言警句为核心主题的议论文，难度一般。

　　在审题时，首先找到核心主题“Respect others, and you will be respected.”-尊重别人，你也将受到尊重。同时关注题目要求“cite examples to illustrate your views”在文章当中要以例子附证你的观点。

　　那么首先在布局谋篇上，同学们可参考议论文的三段式格式进行写作：首段引出核心观点词：respect。中间段落做举例论证，论述respect的重要性，或者respect给我们带来的好处，加以例子作论据。最后一段总结观点即可。

　　例文：

　　“Respect others, and you will be respected.” This proverb subtly conveys the notion about the importance of respect, which forms the basis of moral cultivation. In other words, the feeling of respect is actually mutual.

　　第一段可以这样改写一下：

　　“Respect others, and you will be respected.” This proverb subtly conveys the notion that respect is actually mutual and rewarding. As the core of moral cultivation, respect is of great significance and may exert a long-lasting impact on interpersonal contact.

　　A number of factors can be accountable for this saying. On the one hand, respect brings us closer as it shows that we care about the feelings of others. Only through being respectful can we feel the kindness and love expressed by people around you. On the other hand, mutual respect brings us to a harmonious world. In a society in which the differences between us are easier to spot than the similarities, achieving mutual respect is not just a matter of importance, but of necessity. For instance, when conducting business with people from other countries, it would be impossible for us to hold the same idea on every issue. However, a common ground can be reached when we put aside our differences and be respectful to each other.

　　From what has been discussed above, the significance of mutual respect is evident. Not only does it help narrow the distance in human interactions, but it also contributes to the building of a harmonious world.(197 words)