2021年12月六级写作真题、范文及解析第三套（新东方版）

2021年12月六级写作真题、范文及解析第三套（新东方版）

　　【题目】

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay related to the short passage given below. In your essay, you are to comment on the phenomenon described in the passage and suggest measures to address the issue. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Some parents in China are overprotective of their children. They plan everything for their children, make all the decisions for them, and do not allow them to explore on their own in case they make mistakes or get hurt.

　　【范文】

　　No matter how old you are, you will be familiar with the phrase “Baby …” This is not a term only for kids. The college students are also regarded as babies in their parents’ eyes. At present, the children’s overprotection is widely spreading throughout the country. Facing such a phenomenon, we should know the reasons, and reverse the adverse trend.

　　For one thing, owing to the improved living standards and the limited number of children in each family, most parents provide excessive care and material supplies to satisfy their children’s needs. How many times are we blocked on the commuting way? The reason is not that some traffic accidents happen, but that parents are sending their children to schools. Do they need to do this every day? Of course not! For another, a majority of children only focus on their study, ignoring social communication and practice. Once these offsprings start to face the society themselves, they are unable to solve problems in the competitive world. They are too spoiled to be strong enough to endure the hardships and difficulties.

　　In sum, it is essential for us to solve the problem of children’s education timely and effectively. By undergoing more predicaments, these young people can develop strong personality and live independently in the future, and in this way, they will eventually become qualified participants in the changing world.

　　【范文解析】

　　这篇作文围绕“父母对孩子的过度保护”相关现象展开。在审题时需注意写作目标：点评现象并针对问题给出原因和建议。根据题目的写作要求，开头段部分引出现象，指出现如今父母溺爱孩子的普遍性。主体段部分通过点评现象，论述出现该现象的具体原因。结尾段给出措施并提出展望，并呼吁培养孩子的独立性。