2021年12月六级写作真题、范文及解析第一套（新东方版）

2021年12月六级写作真题、范文及解析第一套（新东方版）

　　【题目】

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay related to the short passage given below. In your essay, you are to comment on the phenomenon described in the passage and suggest measures to address the issue. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words. Nowadays star chasing is prevalent among many teenagers. They take pop stars as their idols, imitating their way of talking, following their style of dressing, and seeking every chance to meet them in person at great expenses.

　　【范文】

　　The social phenomenon that idol worship is prevalent among youths has become a hot issue nowadays. The stars represent the hero images, whose handsome appearance and unparalleled professional skills are passionately adored by all the fans. Likewise, some teenagers, no matter boys or girls, have won their fame overnight nationwide, which has aroused heated discussion on the outlook on values and the negative impacts of star chasing.

　　From my perspective, idol worship, the thought-provoking social phenomenon, is a double-edged sword which can deeply influence the growth of young people. If youngsters merely adore the idols by imitating their hairstyles or pursuing fashions unreasonably, the obsession will certainly waste a lot of money, time or energy, endangering the efficiency of study or disturbing the daily routines. On the contrary, we will lead a positive and fruitful life if we endeavor to improve ourselves by focusing on the development of ourselves, instead of spending too much time in star chasing. Consequently, the latter attitude should be adopted to direct our way of life.

　　As far as I have discussed, the phenomenon sends out a message to all the social members: it should not be remained in the present condition. The trendy online media，the educational sectors, and parents should undertake the responsibility to help the young erect a correct outlook for life. With such a value, the younger generation can grow into the qualified socialist successors.

　　【范文解析】

　　这篇作文围绕 “追星现象” 展开。审题需要注意两个点：①题目里描述的追星现象偏负面。②点评现象后需要给出建议。根据题目的写作要求，开头段部分引出现象并简要描述。主体段部分点评现象，论述不理智追星带来的坏结果。然后针对追星有关的问题给出建议。 结尾段部分重申立场，并呼吁帮助年轻人树立正确的人生观。