2016年6月英语六级作文考前练习(一)：旅游

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　　Writing

　　Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay, entitled Going on a Package Tour or a Self-tour. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.

　　1.有些人喜欢跟团旅游

　　2.有些人喜欢自助旅游

　　3.你的看法

　　【范文】：

　　A Package Tour or a Self-guided Tour?

　　①Whenever people go traveling, they will face a difficult problem of choosing between going on a package tour and going on a self-guided tour. ②People preferring to go on a package tour hold the opinion that you don't have to worry about the schedule, transportation and accommodation, which makes it possible for the tourists to fully keep their minds on enjoying the beautiful scenery and becoming familiar with the local customs. ③And what's more, it is much safer and money-saving than self-guided tour. ④ On the contrary, people who are in favor of a self guided tour argue that they will feel quite free in arranging the schedule of the tour and may stay in their fancy place (destination) as long as they like to enjoy the beautiful scenery, to go shopping, or to enjoy snacks of different tastes, completely without considering the limitation of time. ⑤In addition, self-guided tour may test and improve people's, especially the youngsters' determination, perseverance, confidence and abilities to deal with difficulties.

　　⑥Therefore, it all depends on what kind of tour one may choose. ⑦If I have enough time and money, I will choose self-guided tour for freedom and flexibility; however, if time is limited and I want to save energy, perhaps I will consider package tour.

　　【解析】

　　①总述人们在选择旅游方式上的矛盾，开篇用 Whenever引导让步状语从句，让人眼前一亮。

　　预览：

　　②陈述团队旅游的优点，综合运用同位语从句、定语从句等复杂句式，提升文章的档次。

　　③用And what's more表示递进，进一步陈述团队旅游的优点。

　　④用On the contrary进行自然过渡，引出对立的观点，句中综合使用定语从句、宾语从句排比句式等复杂句式，为文章增色。

　　⑤用In addition表示递进，进一步陈述自助旅游的优点，其中determination，perseverance为亮点同。

　　⑥用Therefore进行过渡，总结全文。

　　⑦借助however前后对比，陈述个人观点。

　　好句操练

　　★ People preferring to go on a package tour hold the opinion that... a. People who prefer to go oil a package tour argue that...

　　b. People who are in favor of going on a package tour maintain that... c. People preferring to go on a package tour insist that...

　　★ Therefore, it all depends on what kind of tour one may choose.

　　a. Therefore, it is really hard to determine what kind of tour one may choose.

　　b. Therefore, it's no easy job for people to decide what kind of tour to choose.

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